Darky mate ! Where are you?!!!

wow that poem is very eye opening and humbling... awesome job... its sad how poeple think that they have it bad and everything when there are always others worse than them. awesome job

wow, really makes me feel guilty when i think i'm hungry. and when i complain. Greatly writen poem, makes you realize there are definately others who have bigger problems that are harder to solve doesn't it?

~PLP~ lil slam~

Is there a gibberish translator in the house? I can't make head nor nail of that uber-babble you flung onto the screen during your latest spasmodic seizure. You should offer your posting style to hospital operating theatres as a highly-effective alternative to unconsciousness-inducing medications.

Thanks for your contribution, but if I had wanted to hear from somebody with your IQ, I'd be at my local supermarket talking to the vegetables. You wouldn't know Up from Down if you had three guesses. However, I'll consider letting you have the last word if you guarantee it will be your last. I suggest you need Mark Twain's advice; "It is better to be silent and be thought a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt."

You are a bore, and a very dull one at that. Any friend of yours is a lousy judge of character. Seriously, I've come across decomposing dog carcases that are less offensive to the senses than you are. Maybe you wouldn't be such a Jerk-In-The-Box if you didn't have an intellect rivaled only by the Village Idiot's stupider brother; if your weren't so fat that your local 'All-You-Can-Eat' buffet had to install speed bumps, or if you didn't have a face that makes your dentist treat you by mail-order. No, come to think of it, you would.

You light up a room when you leave it. No doubt your life is so dull, that you can actually write your diary one week in advance. If I had wanted to talk to somebody with your personality, I would be at the damn pet store talking to the lizards. Maybe you wouldn't come across as such a jellyfish-sucking mental midget if your brain cells weren't on the Endangered Species list; if your weren't so fat that your clothes come in three sizes: Extra Large, Jumbo, and Oh-My-God-It's-Coming-Towards-Us!, or if you didn't have a face like a bulldog chewing a stinging nettle while taking a constipated dump in a heat wave. No, come to think of it again, you would.

If there's an idea in your head, it's in solitary confinement. You could type every thing you know on the subject on back of a microscopic postage stamp and still have room leftover for a shopping list. However, I'll consider letting you have the last word if you guarantee it will be your last. I am reminded of something relevant that Benjamin Disraeli said: "He was distinguished for ignorance - for he had only one idea and that was wrong."

Say, I would gladly like to contribute to the "vote a 1 at Dark Savior's poems" spree here, what do you think? Well, your response doesn't matter, here I go!

Ignornance is Bliss or so they say. also there is a woman by the name of Freda Adler who once said, and repeated to say "Stripped of ethical rationalizations and philosophical pretensions, a crime is anything that a group in power chooses to prohibit."

If my life is so boring, how boring is your life that you have to sit down and write a comment that bad. Since you like mark twian so much, here is a quote from him. " Let us be thankful for the fools. But for them the rest of us could not succeed."

Now i am done with you, cause your boring and my reponse is limited to people who actually know poetry and know abit about it.

Considering my best friends father is an english teacher and i am going to start to learn from him, i think you should check your statements, i know what i am writing, if people don't like that's fine by me, but honestly, my poems seem to be good for me, people can yell and vote them down. Deep down inside, i truely care for each one of my poems; they are not something that i need approvel for, rather something i wish to share with the world.

Signed,
Dark Savior.

Wow. I was wondering what those annoying neg. comments said, I guess most were erased...but the ones from Omicron I saw...what a.....well I am just sorry you had to hear from horrible little twits like them...it's like really - get a life! They should have something better to do than write nasty comments to people...just one of those comments...so horrible and untrue! Made me angry...I'd say she was really talking about herself but unaware of the fact...*sigh* There will always be haters...

Anyways, great poem...fantastic job actually...I was seriously tearing up a bit...I know it's true....worse even....and people don't often think about it....don't realize how precious so many things would be to someone else less fortunate....that think nothing of.....and we all could be more appreciative.....

Thank you, again, for all the comments. Thank you sooooo much. I definitely want to chat later...about some of your comments and stuff....

xxx

This is a excellent poem.It made me realize that there are people out there that have is so much harder then we do and we really need to be happy for what we have life could be so much harder.5/5

*~JAMIE~*

Wow, that was deep. The words you used and how you described everything sent a shiver down my spine. It's strange, so many people don't think about what it would be like to have nothing. I'd say that the 6th stanza was definately the most powerful.

I see nothing that needs changing ^^ Truly deserving a 5/5

--Ashe

Very moving poem. It conveys such an honest message. Keep writing. Honest Luck.

Sarah

Very nice.. its one of those poems you talk about wit ppl wen in deep conversation.. and show to ur friends.. beautifully written and it was very sweet of you to think of writing about such a subject!! 5/5

Hey! Its been a while since I have got to read some of my favorite authors poems. ( I rarely get on) I have read this before and wanted to share it with a friend. Thankyou for helping her open her eyes a little . This was a strong, powerful write. Very creative poet , I love your expressions.
-Angela