first of all thank you for commeting on my poem. it was only me second one and you are right, it sounds better if it rhymes. I can relate to this poem..once i heard that the hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love someone else..and i think it definately applies to this

Thank you so much for commenting on my poem Carmen. I do know what it's like loving someone who unfortunately doesn't love you in return. Great job keep up the good work

5/5 Thats was good! It would of been better if you had Capital Letters For Every Word Though...hehe. Nice 1 !

wonderful poem, i love it!

luv it. wonderful poem keep it up

Yes my poem has the same name as a move..."Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" (with kate winslet and jim carrey) and what happened in the movie is what my poem is about.. if you've seen it, they erases kates memory..and that is what I want to do because I don't want to remember my ex boyfriend and all the pain.. thanks for your comment.. it meant a lot..

Another great poem, I loved it, it reminds me of how I once felt, but now I'm with that girl...........

i know how u feel babe well done its a gr8 poem! xx

if u av chance plz comment on my poems it keeps me writin xxx

your a really good writer ~great poem~

this poem is awsome a bit short and their could maybe be a few improvments but over all i think its great

Thats exactly how I feel sometimes. Good job, 5/5
~Emmy