Aww, That was really good, It flowed nicely. Check mine out sometime. Keep up the great work

Happy Easter <3<3
xoxo
Aubs

Hey, Really Great poem once again lol. xxx

Ah hearts are often broken, by words left unspoken... nice poem, i liked the flow, but next time i suggest that you tell ur girl exactly how you feel;)

Ana*

Is it...i think you should have figure it out now...right? Nice poem...as always...you amaze me...thanks for your comments...you help me improve a lot...

YOU leave my speechless with a lot of your writes. I love your rhyme scheme and your word choice!

I have to comment on this one again because I feel it is just so..so....so powerful. You're an awesome poet with such passion in your writing!

Wow, great heartfelt poem. im gonna cry now.lol. depends y and how u let her go suppose and i suppose that everything rests on if u really loved her. well keep writting cuz thats wt u do best aparently and take care.

Loved it you are a really talented writer keep it real!