Thats very creative....I love to write poems based on stories I read or people I read about and you made a wonderful follow through

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
***Heather Michelle Craig***

Beautiful Heart touching story...read it sometime ago but never thought someone would write it down as a poem...Beautiful work...take care and keep smiling....FIVE>>>

I couldnt control my own tears from flowing,very sad very sweet

That was a wonderful poem! You are truly a great writer! Maybe if you can, my poems are not that long, maybe sometime if you are bored, you can check out my poems too! I will be looking at all of yours! And once again, GREAT POEM! I give you 5/5! Bye!
~Amanda~

awwwwwwwww dats so incredibly sweet amazing! great topic great writing!!! xxxxxx

Nice write, very well written~
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

good job you have some major talent email me at spongebob_llj@hotmail.com and ill see if i can get you into one of our books

You write reali well keep it up great read plz comment and vote on some of mine

Kool poem.
well written.
keep it up.
5/5

Well I did read the story in a fwd mail some time back but cldnt blv tht it cld hav been put so btfully into a poem..Wonderful Write :)

Well done. i liked it . and loved it that how u translated an article in such beautiful words and that 2 very beautifully. keep it up!
bharti

Namaste!!

Wow..which news paper do you read btw?? this was so emotional...so emotional that i am speechless. Great work of converting that article to a poem..i loved every word of it and i admire the fact that u r Indian...great work and keep it up..all the best forever...Nitin Mongia

Well done i love this poem. it such a beautifuul storey n yes i agree lovers r blindd,love is not.

take care
sonam