I Need To Stop..

by Danielle   Mar 27, 2005


I need to stop. This pain Punctures me, and then comes the guilt. Flowing out of me right before my eyes learning the meaning of the sting. The darkness falls behind me, hiding my eyes, Tears that are falling silently to the floor. Leaving my soul laying on the ground in front of my face, no desire to have it back either. So there goes my chance to save it, Forever gone.... I feel real again...

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  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    i like it, has real emotion in it...just one thing, "This pain Punctures mes"
    you have a s on the "me" just a little mistake thought i'd mention it...well anyways great poem keep it up! and thanks so much for your comment on mine it really meant alot!

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    very good poem, one thing, I think it would be better if it was in stanzas... lol you dont have to listen to me though well done