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by hopelena Mar 27, 2005 category : Love, romance / lost love
Please come back and take away my pain i want u 2 make me feel good times again I've never felt like this before i just ask you and nothing more to show me your care in all different ways and the pain will disappear for the rest of my days i don't feel like going out with other guys who can't even make me feel comfort in their eyes tell me that you'll help me take this feeling away so that i could at least continue for next may I'm really sorry for letting you go please forgive me because it's my fault, i know so what do you really want me to do? should i finally admit that i still love you? OK i still do and this feeling i can't regret and i ask you again to forgive me and my mistakes forget i miss your hugs your words...simply you that i always wait for the lovely messages that i once knew you once told me that i was your light and i told you that you were my knight i sit down alone and wonder what you were doing are you sleeping, studying, or remembering us together sitting? i want to tell you this and that's what I'll always say that all memories we had, in mind will forever stay i guess that after all this you will understand that your absence i can and will never stand so please, i ask you again to come back and take me with you on the same track! *guys...please vote & write comments! thanks
by Kelsey
Your poem is excellent! It explains some stuff I am feeling right now and that I have been feeling for a while!!! Keep writin!
by hopelena
hey guys! please i'd like to know ur opinion on this poem!