Embrace who you are and trash they are words, many fit into their category but theres only one Lil Luce hehe! great poem and I do agree! :D |
by Barbara Jean
i really liked this. this was good. thought it was kinda funny in a way. was this about you?lol you must had one of those days..lol |
by Lil Luce
erm i suppose it was about me in certain ways but more about peoples negative views on people who dont 'fit in'! thanks for your comments! means a lot! |
by Barbara Jean
well that was good and i know where your coming from. |
by Lil Luce
yea i understand 100%! thats y i wrote the poem! i used to get mess taken at school and so did some of my mates. its all about the person inside and i want people to see it! |
This is really great. I love the topic. Great job hun! |
by Georgi
hahahaha loved it!!!!! sooooooo true!! wow is tht what ppl think of popular ppl??????? ouch. lol |
by Emilia
wow great poem Lil Luce! thanks for all your comments.. I meant a lot.. 5 stars for this one.. take care |
by Pianist
So true. The unique crowd is the best |
Hey, if you are getting this it is because I like your poem, lol, keep it up!!! YEAH! |
by Emma
Wow! I loved this, great job! This flows really well. 5/5. Love Emma xxx |
by hussain
this poem sends out a powerful message and i think its a great poem |
by confusion
your poems always have such a great message behind them, this one i liked in particular, always be yourself as no one else can be. brilliant! |
by shannon
loved it! a 5/5 |
this is a very interesting poem. its kinda funny...and i think it would really help those who think they're better then every one, to see...that life is full of different people, and they're just going to have to accept that, weither they like it or not!! muahaha ^.^ |
by Nikki
i love it and its true i agree why try to fit in you should check out my poem called why its kinda along the same lines |
by Natalie84
What a great message!! Ok I never fit in to the "popular" crowd either but I WASHED MY HAIR!! lol I really think the message in this poem is awesome! Some kids take stuff like that so hard. They want to be cool and hang out with the "cool" guys and it ruins them.....Very nice write!! 5/5 |