by HJ Mar 27, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Red streaks of sunlight, |
Impressive. I like the way your poems flow and the fact that they rhyme is even better. I think its harder to express emotion when it rhymes, but when you can it makes it all worthwhile. |
by Amit
Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing! |
by Brookeღ
Once again another great poem! U have such an amazing way with ur words! Take Care! Brooke |
by Miss Krueger
Very powerful poem! I loved it.. Keep up the good work! Deep thoughts- Miss Krueger |
by DavidBrendan
This was a really great poem. It relates to me and things I've been thinking about and that you captured the feeling in it was really good. Keep it up |