excellent poem!

wow! it has such strong imagry!

its beautiful!

keep it up hun!
<3 jennn

hi HJ nice job, keep up the good work. and on your trip stay safe, and then come back and write a poem about your friend. you will not only have the desire too, but also the drive, to get it done quickly. your friend Harry

a skillful write from the heart and soul

HJ, Truly a beautiful poem from the heart. I truly love reading your work, wish you would do more. I always look forward to reading a new one written by you. You take Care, hugs, lol, *Ann*

very well written I must say....the wording was perfect! :-) Keep it up!

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
***Heather Michelle Craig***

I am liking this a lot.

The poem knows exactly what it wants to say, is not meandering in any way, just impelling the reader towards its meaning.

But i'm not there yet ;-)

great poem! i love it! really amazing so sweet and woven together with perfect words showing the love for the other! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

I liked your poem, lighten up, don’t be sad!
Ill be posting a new poem up soon “Dear Journal”, so look out for it. When I do, could you plz read it as well as rate/comment it. Thank you, it is much appreciated.

Great poem really nicely written hey since your so good check out mine and see what im doing wrong

This was a really great poem. It relates to me and things I've been thinking about and that you captured the feeling in it was really good. Keep it up

Very powerful poem! I loved it.. Keep up the good work! Deep thoughts- Miss Krueger

Once again another great poem! U have such an amazing way with ur words! Take Care! Brooke

Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Impressive. I like the way your poems flow and the fact that they rhyme is even better. I think its harder to express emotion when it rhymes, but when you can it makes it all worthwhile.