Real me to show

by Switchblade89   Mar 27, 2005


The true me hasn't had a real chance to show,
cause it seems to me,you don't care to know,
don't think I'm saying you don't,
it's just until you prove it,I won't

I wish you could see the real me,
and these fakes weren't the real things you could see,
I want to know how you would feel,
if you could see what was real,

I'm so afraid you wont like whats under these fakes,
that I don't want to show you and make any mistakes,
but if you want to see the real me,
just ask and maybe,I will let you see,

But I still have a question for you,
would you really want me to?
I really have to know,
If you want the real me to show,

I'm pretty sure you laughing at me,
With those silly giggles he,he,he,
but understand what I say and ask is true,
and it's a question I'm truly asking you,

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Nice one...you really are gifted...can't wait to see more...

  • 19 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey, if you are getting this it is because I like your poem, lol, keep it up!!! YEAH!
    Ill be posting a new poem up soon “Dear Journal”, so look out for it. When I do, could you plz read it as well as rate/comment it. Thank you, it is much appreciated.

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    I dont think its too similar to "Paintbrush" same meaning perhaps, just different words...no shame in that =) keep writing

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    The Heart That Touches Yours,
    Heather Michelle Craig

  • 19 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    This is similar to "The paintbrush" in that chicken soup book but I did not copy it from there.