awsome work Abbi! wow!! 5 stars for this one *****

this was a great piece of work i liked althouigh no offense work on the rhymes a little bit they seemed forced some of them

great poem!! keep it up!! :) take care. nicely written!!

i don't know the last time i felt so much emotion and scary power in a poem... excellent job!!!

Very good... 5/5! very well-written.. HUgs

it's real

Perfect