Would you care if i stoped

by The Flame Within   Mar 28, 2005


Would you care if i stopped being your friend
would it matter if i loved you in the very end

did you really want me to leave you alone
after all the things we said, after all the love i have shown

was there something wrong with me loving you so much
but its true when i say my heart you have touched

i Will always be your friend, no matter what you say
i want to be there even if you walk away

but should i do all the things i just said
or should I forget it and wish to be dead

I'm not sure what to do, i have tried so hard
but it seems all my messaged, you just discard

so tell me, do you really want to be my friend
because i will care for you to the very end

would you really care if i stopped and would leave
would you really care and begin to grieve

tell me before i start to go insane
before you cause me anymore pain

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  • 19 years ago

    by Iyla

    awwwwwwwww.........*tear* that is so sweet, i really like this poem. it was great!!
    ~Take Care~
    -Kit

  • 19 years ago

    by Ally xo

    to a true friend,

    aw that was a very sweet poem ignorant u shud b lucky he cares about u so much i almost cried in the poem because it has so much meaning to it
    nick i loved loved it and thankx for leaving me a quote and i am ok it is just noone understands me lol anyway talk to you later

    Ally

  • 19 years ago

    by The Flame Within

    please no, there is no need to end our friendship. i would like to be your friend. if there is anything wrong then please let me know. i would like to be your friend. even if i hurt, thats life. i want to be your friend. please

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    and damnit, if you left me, Nick, I"d be more of a wrech than I am now! Because then I'd know I was right all along!! The people you trust do turn on you, its not something I want to be right on, but its likely that its true. I don't want to see you hurt either though, so if you can't take my crying or the things that I do that hurt you, break away from me and save yourself from me. I'm sorry if I did hurt you or if I continue,I don't know what else to do. I'm in shock and have this urge to seclude myself from everyone. But I can't. Please understand. If you feel its best, then I will end our friendship.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Assumably this is about me. I don't want to see you hurt Nick. Never have I wanted to see that, but I'm hurt. I'm still sick to my stomach even though she survived and is in the hospital in critical condition. I do want a friend Nick, I do, but........

    I dont know. I'm confused and I need time to think. You're acting as if I hurt you, but I didn't. I hurt myself.

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