This expresses depression and hopelessness so well. very well written

Once again I'm amazed, you are such a caring person Amanda, that's a gift!!! I love this poem, it descibed all of my feelings I have inside, so I really relate!!! It deserves more than a 5...

Luv Sabrina

excellent poem!! i like it!

Hey, this is really good...and all soo true...keep on writing and take care...great job!!
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

hun this is a great poem......im sure so many people can relate to it, including myself.......keep up the great work =)

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Great Poem! It feels so real ... keep up the great work!

Good poem again, Linzi=)

You seem to be good at this!

Can tell you something? This is not criticism, or anything, just a simple thought=) You are a good writer, but the poems I've read seem to be about very common topics, and they will be easily forgotten among all the good writers on this site. Could you write a poem with a more unusual theme? Or an allegory or something? I think you be great at it!

Keep writing=)

Thanks for your comments. I only write about my true feelings because it helps me to deal with them thats all.

hey i love it!!! good job!!! i'm glad to say i think i may be making progress in catching up on your poems:)

i love this poem these line here remind me of me

Do you ever feel the need to ask if people care,
for your reassurance to know if they are there,
Do you feel like giving up before you even try,
get a upset feeling that makes you wanna die,

Do you ever sit alone and play the saddest song,
get a simple feeling, everything you do is wrong,

great job awesome lol. i love it

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

yep i have felt all that and more great job writing it

awesome and i know all those feelings right now... life sux and nothings right great job