AWWWW! I'm sorry about that! SO sweet though! I hope everything works out for you! ~5/5~ |
by VampyraKiâ€
A very touching poem i hope you feel better |
by erotema
great poem and theme. keep up the excellent work. you have a lot of talent. |
by cac123
beautiful, hey thanx for the comments, i could really use them from such a great writer like you!! seriously i loved it wonderfull job, i dont relaly have time right now to read the rest, but i will do it as soon as i get the chance. can't wait to read more!! |
by AJ
pretty good. I liked it. 5/5 thanks for the comment. ~keep it up~ |
A moving way with your words this time honey. You sounded hurt not bitter and I hope you realise that sometimes guys just aren't worth the tears you cry. You're one of my faves as always. Take care Love Rach xx |
by Shy
very nice |
by Misstress
I can feel the emotions beneath the poem...nice job. |
by Frankie
This is a beautiful poem, 5/5 all the way! |
by Marjan
good choice of words. you're really talented. keep it up. love, Marjan |
by Marjan
this is very beautifully written. |
by abcede
oh i can feel how real it is!! great write!! i loved it!! |
by Areyoucrazy
excellent poem dear . I loved it so much .. I would seriously die if I lost my bf ..so important .... once again awesome job ! |
very good....but who's kate? im confudled |
by M MEM
Very sad, very good too. i like the last part, thats very good |
by Lenny
Thats so true, I'm in a crying mood at the mo, Im gunna cry |
Heartbreaking...good work...true emotions... |
by Luke
Nice, i like the pop culture references, i think that made the piece unique. |
Loved it, it was truly great! |
by Wallace
Excellent love poem, I've always thought that love poems were the best poems and you reminded me of that. |