Comments : Unchained

  • 19 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    awww great write hunnie...so sad :( or maybe its not, i dont know, im so emotional. =| anyways...beautiful, beautiful write...i really like this one...deff one of my favs now...lov-i-lee..i hope you're okay..i love you so much...sosoosos much...<33 xxxxx

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow a very different style of writing! very good work!
    please comment on mine!
    take care
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Hey good poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey, if you are getting this it is because I like your poem, lol, keep it up!!! YEAH!
    Ill be posting a new poem up soon “Dear Journal”, so look out for it. When I do, could you plz read it as well as rate/comment it. Thank you, it is much appreciated.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    thank you all for the comments. its good to know that even after such a long time from writing people still like my work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    wow.....FINALLY A POEM !!!! lol, I realy like this one...it's so sad....but I don't know, not that sad on the other side...that didn't make sence whatever...lol. Love you !
    E.

  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Excellent.

  • 19 years ago

    by So-Not-Normal

    YAY FINALLY I CAN READ A NEW ONE!! lol i check beck here everyday to see if u have one and this time u do! and its GREAT one to! its soo full of emotion even though the lines are simple! i l.o.v.e it.. maybe u could check out my new ones pwwweeeez? (new way i say please...lol) it be great if u did! neways i just wanted to say gggreat poem and take care of urself pweeez!
    *-*Kat*-*

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    very good! i love this one =) I voted a 5.. please check out some of my poems.. it would mean a lot ot me.. thanks, hugs