awww great write hunnie...so sad :( or maybe its not, i dont know, im so emotional. =| anyways...beautiful, beautiful write...i really like this one...deff one of my favs now...lov-i-lee..i hope you're okay..i love you so much...sosoosos much...<33 xxxxx |
by Lil Luce
wow a very different style of writing! very good work! |
by Red Charm
Hey good poem. |
Hey, if you are getting this it is because I like your poem, lol, keep it up!!! YEAH! |
thank you all for the comments. its good to know that even after such a long time from writing people still like my work. |
by Elise
wow.....FINALLY A POEM !!!! lol, I realy like this one...it's so sad....but I don't know, not that sad on the other side...that didn't make sence whatever...lol. Love you ! |
Excellent. |
YAY FINALLY I CAN READ A NEW ONE!! lol i check beck here everyday to see if u have one and this time u do! and its GREAT one to! its soo full of emotion even though the lines are simple! i l.o.v.e it.. maybe u could check out my new ones pwwweeeez? (new way i say please...lol) it be great if u did! neways i just wanted to say gggreat poem and take care of urself pweeez! |
by Emilia
very good! i love this one =) I voted a 5.. please check out some of my poems.. it would mean a lot ot me.. thanks, hugs |