How I Feel

by Daniel Fink   Mar 28, 2005


My love for you is so deep,
When your not around I wanna weep,
You take my heart & my life to a new height,
When I am with you I feel just right,
I know our friendships real tight,
So I figure you just might,
Wanna keep me in your sight,
I’ll treat you right & make you feel good,
Girl you really know I should,
I think your beauty is out of sight,
When I look at you my heart takes flight,
I just wanna make everything right,
Maybe that will make our relationship more tight
I hope I make your heart feel good,
Baby I know I would,
Well this is the end but remember,
I just wanna tell you how I feel

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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    i thought this was a good poem, but you might want to try rhyming a little more , as far as differnet words go. the ending is much like the couple other poems i ahve read of yours, but still a nice poem overall...

  • 19 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Great poem, plz, if you could, check out my new poem "Dear Diary". Plz rate and comment it, plz, i would really appreciate it it. I want people to understand the message I am trying to get through.

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiera

    I like that alot. I think it's sweet. Keep it up!

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