I like it! I love the way you ended it "to live an impression on trotted ground!" I loove that!

Hey, if you are getting this it is because I like your poem, lol, keep it up!!! YEAH!
Ill be posting a new poem up soon “Dear Journal”, so look out for it. When I do, could you plz read it as well as rate/comment it. Thank you, it is much appreciated.

Very nice. i love the thought and its great.

I like this one out of the ones i have read...