I

by Lost Girl   Mar 28, 2005


My bleeding heart
You tore apart
Whilst I was still asleep

I can not find a way
I gave up today
I do not want to know

My eyes are red
I sleep with the dead
As I drift through the clouds

I lie on the floor
I can not take any more
I think I might leave

*another one I wrote when I was half asleep*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    I think I might leave

    *another one I wrote when I was half asleep*

    that fits with the poem, leave and asleep fit well together lol. great poem, and thanks for letting me use the poem with you name because lost girl just gave me an idea for the poem. i wasn't sure how you would react to it.

    write forever!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    well you seem to also write great poems when you are asleep, good work keep it up