by Unrequited
wow, Andrea... this is a wonderful poem. and i am so sorry you have to go through all that. I'm here for you! |
Awh girl. You are such a fantastic writer - This poem is very emotional and saddening. |
Wow girl, just keep it strong! no reason to die, a few more years and you're outta there---and everything will be okay =) I promise! I love you girl! |
by Gracie Jo
This was really good! I loved the emotion in it. Great job, sweetie! Stay strong! :-) <3 |
by Ann Stareyes
Andrea, You have so much talent and that is a lot to be proud of. I hate things are difficult for you but like Heather said, it want be long and you can be on your own. Sad but a wonderful poem once again. love ya bunches, *Ann* |
by Solace
I loved it Andrea!! You can feel the emotions and the concept of the whole poem.. Take care and keep your head up.. xx: |
That was awesome Andrea! I really hope this wasn't true! But I'll always be here for you if you need somebody! Amazing job! I wuv you! <3 |
awesome poem! 5/5 great work! |
by Lil Luce
dont put yourself down its a really good poem! i espec liked the end! well dne and thanks for ur comments! |
by Taylor
hey! great poem! really i love it! i always love your poems and i always can't wait for you to write another one! really sad but i can still relate. . . kinda depressing that a lot of people can relate to this. . . o well i still know one thing that can make us smile. . . BIG HAIRY MONKEY NUTS! hehe well keep it up! |
by Just Sierra
Thanks babe for REALLY making me smile!! That has to have been the first smile I've literally smiled since Hailey's attempted suicide. Thanks for being so sweet to me about this. So glad that you understand me!! I'm here for you too, I'll do my best to make you smile you silly girl!! lol. |
i think it is very well written i understand writing is a form of release i do it myself i give it a 5 |
holy crap that is sum strong stuff. i think you got all kinds of talent. your a great writer. thanx for offering to be my friend. What is your email if you dont mind? thank you so much for your comment. it helps me so much really. i hope that you are ok. and i want you to know that i am here for you also aite. peace out god bless and keep the faith . Much Luv |
by joe
you really are your worse judge i presonally thought it was wonderful. |
by katie!
every time you write, your poems are fantastic, this was another great poem, well done |
by EpithetPoet
Wow, this is soooo good. I dont know what you were talking about in your comment. This is phenomenally well written. It just blew me away. |
by samuel
who could ever say your poetry was not good, andrea - who could; you are a waow! |
hey there, um...your email didnt work, im not sure why, but you can email me if you want. ap0c0lipse@hotmail.com(zeros not o's lol) but ya, just wanted to say hey, and i would love to be your friend if that is ok? Much luv aite |
by erely
Hi Andrea...great writing....Take Care..and thank you for your thoughts |
by Unloved ♥
great poem Andrea, you always have great stuff |