Chain Reaction

by Katie Lynn   Mar 28, 2005


Do you see the destruction you've caused
the avalanche of pain and misery
raining down on their heads.

Do you hear the cries of the people you hurt
weaping for thier loss
as they lay in their beds.

Your pain was meager
compared to what they're going to face
they can no longer love for fear of being hurt once again.

A shot to the head is all that it'll take
you decided on the easy way out
just for your own sake.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Katie Lynn

    well leah, we didnt rhyme on purpose, but thanx for the comment anyway

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    I thought that this was good until the last stanza, Blank poety is good as blank poetry, and rhyming poety is good as rhyming poetry, but the two don't mix. So many times I read brilliant blank poetry, and then the last stanza rhymes, which just throws off the entire mood, try to be consistant. Keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    beautiful poem!! keep up the great work. *5*
    Ariane
    -xXx-

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