Loved it, Ann, and the ending fit so well....:-) keep it up sweetheart! God bless you ((hugs))

Heather

AAawwwww ann that was so sweet! Excellent write!!! As always....5/5

Ann, that was lovely. I truly adored it! Lyl, Car

I really like the rhyming in this poem. I love the way your poems are like stories unfolding. Keep up the good work!

Beautiful heart felt piece, you have such a wonderful style of writing, so true and honest. I think that each of us in some way or another can also relate.
The flow was flawless from start to finish.

Thank you again for your kind words on my recent poem 'Fallen'

Kisses
Hayley

Excellent write, ann. keep writing~
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

p/s thanks for voting and commenting on my poems