I can feel your pain through every word, just remember God is in Control , and he doesn't make mistakes, We do, but thats ok, he helps us through it all. Maybe you have become a stronger person, and will be able to help others with tragic losses, I think thats what God has planned for me, and thats why and how I'm dealing with the death of my mom.......Please read mine and see what you think. Your poem was excellant......

That was so sad but such a beautiful poem so well written. Check out some of mine sometime Thanx and Take Care! Brooke

heyy im really sorry i know how much it sucks to loose someone that you love so much.. the poem was great.. your now on my fav list.. keep up the great work.. and itll be okay.. please vote and comment on some of my poems.