The idenity concept

by MAYBE TOMORROW   Mar 29, 2005


A whisper of darkness
engulfed in this wave of emotion
you\'re buried in my veins
an ever so potent poison

love me
hurt me
continue to confuse me

crossing over to the shadow world
no longer able to bear this soul
you needn\'t live this tragedy
simply impossible to control

leave me
kill me
do anything to keep me

your identity is a concept to complex to grasp...

hope u enjoyed it
leave some lines if you have time =) thanks a million

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  • 19 years ago

    by MAYBE TOMORROW

    thanks for ur honesty

    :killer:

  • 19 years ago

    by killedsparatik

    good poem decent use of syllables
    and very connectable meaning

    all in all a decently good one

  • 19 years ago

    by MAYBE TOMORROW

    thanks a bunch =p lol ur rad !

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Loved the last line....thought provoking! keep it up =) 5

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    The Heart That Touches Yours,
    Heather Michelle Craig