Well written. I love it.

damn girl a sister need to catch up with a little sister on my writting....^_^ heather wanna teach your big sis here how to write? j/p you know if i could i would give you like an 11/5 but it wont let me. but you know i got my little sisters back

aww i loved it!!! thanks for commenting on mine finally i see someone my own age on here lol !! but yeah great work one of my favorite poems on here so far

good poem 5/5
thanks for commenting on mine
*BECKY*