Pain

by Sonia   Mar 29, 2005


As I look around, I can feel the pain
It's slowly driving me insane
My tears don't stop flowing
I'm trying to make it stop showing
This is creating some problem
Which is causing my world to crumble
It's making my untouched heart ache
Though I'm trying to forget for his sake
I thought I couldn't live without him
Though,life's going to carry on without a dim
He was my past
Who left me last
I shut my light
Letting my sorrow come to sight
Now darkness will take away my pain
Where,it will soon leave me sane

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  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    It was pretty good. You had it good at the beginning. You were providing a flow for the reader, but then it sort of went away. Try writing a poem where each line has exactly ten syllables. Just try it. See if you like it.

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