Sorry...

by Sonia   Mar 29, 2005


What happened to the love we shared?
When we would laugh together and cry together
What happened to the promises we made?
To stay with eachother for eternity
What happened to the memories we shared?
When nothing else matter except us
What happened to you?
What happened to me?
What happened to our lives?
That's living without a cause
My anger is slowly killing me inside
My confusion is taking over my mind
My questions are left unanswered
Your silence is torturing my soul to death
When I look at your eyes
My eyes fill up with water
I'm sorry for hurting you
I'm Sorry for taking adavantage of 'us'
I'm sorry for not understanding you
I'm sorry for loosing faith in our love
But most of all I'm sorry that I can't make things right

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  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is a very nicely written poem with a true emotions showing, keep it up dear.

  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    All in all pretty good. I have one thing to say though about this line:

    "When we would laugh together and cry together"

    See how you use together twice. Try to avoid using words again, especially in the same sentence. You could have fixed it very simply by doing this:

    "When we would laugh and cry together"

    See how that flows so much better.

    For verbs or adjectives use a thesaurus. I'm not saying you have an elementary vocabulary. I know of many great poets that use them like the bible. That's all for now

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