God took you away

by David   Mar 29, 2005


God took you away
you were only 22.
I think to myself
why'd you drink all that brew

God took you away
it doesn't seem fair.
You had so much to give
so much left to share.

God took you away
from those who loved you.
Some of them wish
they could have went too.

God took you away
you touched so many alive.
You left us so fast
we cant help but wonder why.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsea King

    This is a really great poem!! It is sad but tell what happens to great people who leave to soon, i loved it!!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lovexthexwayxyouxlie

    Awww dats so sad gr8 poem huni.xxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Emilie

    That poem was very touching and sad. I think it was really well done. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ~:.GodeSsOfTemPtati0n.:~

    sad but very well written... sorry bout ur loss...

    hope u read this one... i find it good... but i'll leave the judgement to u...

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=308221

    thank u very much...
    ++letishia++

  • 19 years ago

    by Forever29

    Very strong poetry! 5!

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