Hey this is a little bit weird...but in a way i can relate to this...glad you posted it...keep on writing and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

yeah its weird, but i like weird.....keep up the great work =)

-brittnay-

For some reason i really got it, it was real strange but really good! keep it up!
xxxxx

thanks guys, glad to know I'm not on my own

#~*LuCy*~#

oh i understand what you mean i wrote those kind of poems all the time keep expressing i like, 5/5 i thought. thx for posting on my poems

thats a sad poem but i like it, love ya sam xox
ps thanx for the comment :D

your right it is weird but its us weird peopleho understand them i understood it totally it was completely good all in all i gave it a 5/5 as well keep writing adn dont think your bad and writing even if some one says so they are only one person and there are other that like it it just dependson what they like

☼~☼Becky☼~☼

this is going to sound wierd but i understand the poem its an open poem and i knoe how that feels to have dreams about your past i hate my past and i caut over mine so if you ever want to talk sometime you know my name

wow what a good poem, i really really liked it. this is comment one of five!!!

Hey lucy... im commenting again hehe... anyways... this poem was really sad... im starting to think its true after reading 3 of your poems.. and if so im turly sorry. But keep writing because you have alot of talent.

That poem wasn't weird, it was just...good! theres nothing else to say but it was really really good!

Ohh I love weird so no fears, this was amazing. Really great job.

Amazing again. Now you are probbly getting sick of my comments. I loved this one. My favorite stanza was :

desert cancels out the rain
rain cancels out the heat
heat cancels out the cold
cold cancels out the desert

because its the truth. its an ongoing cycle. and its also true its usually ourselves that we are afraid. afraid of who we are afraid of who we will become and afraid of what we are to face. 5/5

I loved this poem u put a lot of emotion in here I enjoyed your unique way of wording things excellent job

Its not weird i realli like it...5/5 ... read and comment some of mine =]] i would like your opinion