Love

by Daniel Fink   Mar 29, 2005


Love is a thing I have felt before,
When I lost it, it made my heart so sore,
My love was named Mary,
I thought she was more beautiful than any fairy,
My love for her was so strong,
I never thought anything would go wrong,
God my love for her was so strong,
She brutally ripped my heart from my chest,
All she could say is go away pest,
I never felt this bad,
I cant believe I just been had,
She took my heart from my chest,
I thought I was her best,
This poem just makes me depressed,
I hope my heart will soon beet again in my chest,
Maybe one day I will be some girls best,
This will be the end but remember,
Love was a thing I have felt before.

* hey everybody this is a really old poem I wrote this so long ago hope you like it*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    very cute poem....but i agree with the others about repeating words. Keep on writing.
    SatuzKa

  • 19 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    Good poem, but you keep repeating words. Not sure i like that.

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    cute poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Dangerous Angels

    that wasn't too bad. You sure got to the point but you need to put more feeling into the words. ANd try not to be to repetitive.

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