by Daniel Fink Mar 29, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Love is a thing I have felt before, |
by Dorotea©
very cute poem....but i agree with the others about repeating words. Keep on writing. |
Good poem, but you keep repeating words. Not sure i like that. |
cute poem |
that wasn't too bad. You sure got to the point but you need to put more feeling into the words. ANd try not to be to repetitive. |