Mary

by Daniel Fink   Mar 29, 2005


My love for Mary is so very strong,
I hope nothing will ever go wrong,
I gave her all of my heart,
So maybe our love will never part,
I also gave her my internal soul,
Because she makes my as so very whole,
I would give up my life just to see one smile,
For a world without that smile would just defile,
I would even would give her my love in bed,
Because I always want her love in my head,
For without that love my heart will be dead,
I hope she loves me with all her heart,
So then I will truly know we will never part,
This is not the end but remember,
Mary I love you with all my heart

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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    really sweet poem..loved it. it had a nice flow.. keep it up!! :) take care.

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    I love your poetry so I think you're wrong.. I voted a 5 for this one..
    keep it up.. please check ouy my poem "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" it would mean so much.. hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    I cannot do anything, but disagree with the above. This poem is built up with the similar rhymes as the other one I read, it is filled with forced rhyme and forced rhytm.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very sweet poem! Mary is a lucky girl I hope she knows that! Good Luck and keep writing! Take Care Brooke!

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    passionate poem keep writing

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