I love you but i hate you

by Daniel Fink   Mar 29, 2005


I love you but I also hate you,
And my love for you is still strong,
But every thing that could go wrong went wrong,
I only gave you all my heart,
But again we had to part,
So naturally I had to start,
Trying to get you back with all my power,
Once I had a love more beautiful than any flower,
But your love for me just came to an end,
But still my love for you can never end,
So this from me I send,
My internal soul and my almighty heart,
Just its sad we had to part,
This may not be the end but remember,
I love you but I hate you

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Yes, really strange how we can hate and love a person all at the same time:)

    I enjoyed reading your poem, you worded your feelings well.

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by Georgi

    Ive noticed that all your poetry is in the same layout, well the ones ive noticed anyway. why dont you try an "abab" style? of aabb, in structured stanzas? i think it may suit your writing?
    Take care
    Geo
    oxoxxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Krissey

    Oh man I am sorry to hear about this...love sucks sometimes, but hang in there and keep smiling! makes you feel somewhat better! Like the way you wrote this! It was different but very good!
    -Krissey

    P.S could you please read "two voices unheard"

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    cute poem, keep it up!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    I liked it, i have been there I made that love my best friend. We are a lot closer now.

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