I totally agree with you on this. Great poem
- shell

AAaawwwwwwwwww beautiful heather!!! That was so sweet!!! (your little message) Nothing was sweet about that poem.....It sucks....I can't tell you how many poems I have read that just make me want to cry. I don't understand cutting or anything of that nature but it's really sad that young teens are going through things that are so rough they turn to that....Great message Heather!! 5/5

Heather,I am speechless.For your age to come out with such a thought..amazing and I loved it.You are very smart.The message was so important.Thanks for your comments on mine.I give you 5.Jeff

Heather, Such a wonderful message that you are trying to get across. And you wrote it well. My heart goes out to all those dealing with the problems of their life. But we all have to learn to deal with things and try to solve these problems we have in order to make them better. Great job Heather and harming yourself is never the answer. hugs, Lots of love, *Ann*

heather that was a wonderful poem. i cant hold a candle to ur poems. keep it up

A cool wonderful poem.

wow...i'm really thinking about that...this is one of those "thinking" poems that make you realize and coome to your senses. but i'm kinda stubborn even though i still love you, but i am seriously trying my best to stop cutting. i havent cut in two days!! yay!! lets hope i dont resort to it tonight. i love you!! *hugs*

Its a thoughtfull poem huny, well written too. But Id juts like to point out, as a self-harmer, that it may seem easy to relaise that you're hiding behimd deeper problems, but its not. People dont frown upon alcoholics or drug abusers in the way they do about self-harm, so I think its harder to try and get help. Sorry for the negetivity, just not a good day, and need to express. Take care, and keep writing

xX MAZ Xx

i loved your poem it made me realize the things ive done past and present you did a wonderful job in the writing !!!!

Great work Heather, been down that road, trying to get off it! You sent out a great message. (btw, I was very shocked to see your comment on my poem, it blew me away, 'cause I look up to you! Youre one of the best poets on the site...! Wow...)
Keep on smilin' and keep writing :)
-xx-
Broken Inside

Awesome....such a powerfully positive message! Great job~Holly

It's not always been about the negitives, I used to wake up and run down to the tree and wonderd what might be in the boxes to.. Its just that when the boxes started disapearing, and the skitzophrena took over.. and my mind made a new path for me to walk.. thats were I decided life isnt how it should be..

hey great poem... it really made me think. Thanks
Thank you for your comment on my poem! Much love ~ Tina

WOW great poem, strong message. it's what a lot of people need to hear. i had a feeling you would like the ending of featherless angel, take care

~PLP~lil slam~ lots of hugs and love~

Great write, Heather. I liked the last verse.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

~:.nice poem heather... short but very powerful... i'm a cutter... yet i dunno what to say after reading this... i went mentally block for now... but ima come back and, hmmm read some of urs... i liked this one.... trust us... its amazingly well written...:~

hope u pass by mine sometimes =) i wrote a series... and hmmm they need a honest critique... votes much appreciated too...
much love
***letishia***

wow! this is really really good1
i love it

loved it! it had a good message in it and it flowed really well around that point. very well done, i really enjoyed reading it. keep up the excellent work!

~*LorienElf*~

Loved It 5.0 xOxo-Nikki-xOxo

Hey, this is really good...and itz true...keep on writing and take care..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy