Emotional, but it fell apart towards the middle. I'll give it a 4.

wow, I'm sos sorry Zoe, I wish I could hit both of them...actually I will ! tomorow...(6) lol. Very emmotional poem, I really like it, and now I feel really bad...I'll just finish my chocolate...love you zoe !
E.

This is a good poem. U deserve so much better, move on and forget about him. He sounds like a d**k.
Take care
- shell

I'm really sorry, i hope you are ok. you deserve someone better, someone that recognises how great you are. keep writing(i wish i could just cant seem to write). keep it up, its well written. good job.

Here is what you asked for:

We were just “friends with benefits”,
Our kisses meant nothing to you,
But when I was enlaced in your arms
I wanted to say: “I love you!”

After February vacation,
When you fooled around with someone else
We never had our moments again,
You hid me away on your shelf.

You’re now practically dating this girl
Who is now your best friend’s ex,
I wish that you were only going out with her
For and objective reason: sex.

Those 3 lines ruined it for me.

Hey this is good...im sorri that you've gone thru alot...keep ur head up..i hope thingz get better...*hugz*
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

Awww Zoe you deserve so much better your such a great person with such a great heart. I hope everything gets better for you.. amazing poem as always 5:)
Jennifer