Sorry about that!!! lol.....This poem is so funny and I can't stop laughing at the end.....You have ao much talnet girl, I love your poems!!!

HUGS Sabrina

beautiful... i love it.

wow.. did it happen for real ?

i like the poem .. its sweet. There is such a thing as true love..

take care 5/5!

very romantic

romantic mood huh? i could tell... keep up the good writing... hopefully i'll get some time to write some new poetry for you haha:)

Excellent write, Amanda. Enjoyed reading it~
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

Never met a woman that aggressive in a sexual manner but it was intresting to think you a girl would feel the same way i wrote one called another beer please it is a great contrast you this one tell me what you think.

Loved it! Great job:)

Sweet writing.

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)