very good. kep it up. i would vote it 5/5 but i cant because my voting page doesnot work. but i luv it.

thanks for commenting/voting on my poems. means a lot to me.
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nida

great poem, superb! hope everything is okay.

So sad but good! 5! :)

Awe sad.. hope everythings all right. Great poem by the way.

when i was reading the title, i was thinking, hmm? what is "it" and i thought it would be cancer....this poem is really sad, at the same time happy!! very touching!! i hope everything stays well with you and your family!! take care and be safe! :) nice poem btw.

I Love How You Express Your Feelings In This Poem And The Rest Of Yours..

Keep Up The Good Work

HEy! thanks for reading my poem, and commenting it means alot. I love your poem, and i'm glad your brother is okay.
thanks again

another great poem; i love the feeling and emotion behind it!

Great poem. It's very descriptive of your feelings and there's a clear meaning and lesson behind the poem. Guilt is an emotion that pretty much everyone has felt at one point or another in their lifetime, and I liked the way you included it in your poem. Keep up the good work!
-Kate

Awww hun this poem is really sad. But really good, too. Very well written. Keep it up.
Please check out my poems. Thanks.

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Tiff

sweet touching, knew it came from the heart! Thanks for commenting on my poems nad I loved yours!

that's really sad.. I hope every thing is okay now
5/5
very nicely written as well:)

awwww.... thats so sad... but you did a great job... I can totally fear your pain ...Xox Sherrie

loved it xxxxxx

wow!! awesome poem! you're a wonderful sister, I'm sure.

awww i liked this cos was sweet ending and touching that its true!
xxxLoUxxx

aww thats a really nice poem, i'm glad ur brother is ok if that really is true. really good work on that one
5/5

hey.....that was a really good poem! keep it up...i have one that is kind of like that but its about my sister dieing u already read it i think.....but any way i gave u a 5/5....and it would be fine in you PMed me but there is to people on this name so u might not get me u might get shannon
-amanda

wow, thats a great poem 5/5

very heart felt poem and it is great that you can say this to your little brother good job I enjoyed this alot...