Pick some better rhymes, try not to flow so hard. Good poem, 3/5

Good poem! Your a good writer...Keep it up =D

Another one that I can relate to. It is amazing the way that fate can come back our way. I love the way you expressed this and they way that you made it flow. Keep it up.

~*~Christina~*~

aww this was a sweet poem. awesome awesome job

very nice tribute to your brother.

My mother had gone through that whole ordeal except she did have it. A simple procedure solved it all though. Thank God! Truly lucky we are! Just one of those God given lessons that make life so much better. I think there's a message to be heard in this poem and I definitely like that. Nice write! :)

wow, this is really well written. Keep writing, I enjoy ur poems!
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