Daddy, Oh, Daddy

by Rikki   Mar 29, 2005


Daddy, Oh, Daddy
Where did you go?
How could you leave me, I loved you so!
Where did you go, can I come along?
Why did you leave us, me and my mom?

Daddy, Oh, Daddy
Why didn't you stay?
"I love you Rikki" Didn't you say?
Didn't you say it over and over?
Then how could you leave me for some petty lover?

Daddy, Oh, Daddy
How, I ask, how?
How can it still hurt, hurt even now?
Did it hurt you, even the tinniest bit?
Daddy, I hope you burn in Hell's Deepest pit!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by lana

    Wonderfull job
    i didnt have a dad either
    and my mum missed him so much that she married 4 times ti try and find a guy like him
    it never happend

    hang in there girl
    i liked your poem
    it sounds so true

    lana

  • 19 years ago

    by Emily

    thank you for your complement i truely apreciated it i love your poem it made me think keep it up you have talent.

  • 19 years ago

    by Rikki

    Hey thanks for all the comments! As you probably already know, this was my first posted poem. I'm glad it got such good reviews! :D

  • 19 years ago

    by paulina.♥

    I love that poem. I cannot relate.. Well, a little. I hate my father, but not to the point that I wish he burned in "hell."

    Anyway, keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by hOlly

    very deep. good job=).

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