very deep. good job=).

I love that poem. I cannot relate.. Well, a little. I hate my father, but not to the point that I wish he burned in "hell."

Anyway, keep writing!

Hey thanks for all the comments! As you probably already know, this was my first posted poem. I'm glad it got such good reviews! :D

thank you for your complement i truely apreciated it i love your poem it made me think keep it up you have talent.

Wonderfull job
i didnt have a dad either
and my mum missed him so much that she married 4 times ti try and find a guy like him
it never happend

hang in there girl
i liked your poem
it sounds so true

lana