Drifting

by ♥broken fairytales♥   Mar 29, 2005


Am i living in a dream world
where everything comes true
Am i wishing to hard
on the same old stupid wish
Am i in to deep
to get out of this mess
Am i loving him to much
that I'll never let go
Am i getting to jealous
that I'll hate everyone he ever loves
Is this how it's going to be with him drifting further and further away from me?

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  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    good poem a little rhyme could go along way..great poem *mwah* x)

    sorry spelt it wrong xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    good poem a little rhyme could go along why..great poem *mwah* x)

  • 19 years ago

    by erotema

    not bad. i liked it.
    try to make them more... poetic. some set rythym, some set meter, or some set rhyme... or even all three.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    great poem!

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