This is good tash. I like the line ''Love is the marks on people wrists''. I can totally relate! |
by tiffany
I LOVE IT 5! |
by ღ*KiM*ღ
Wow. I loved the rhyming scheme and felt it was a poem i could really relate to :) Really good! |
by katie!
Wow, that was fantastic, Im really enjoying reading your work, keep writing and take care xx |
To live is to love and to love is to hurt may we all be blessed while we search for love. sometimes it does seem like love does not exist keep writing take care |
by mysterious
really nice work.....love is so many things |
by Robert
well this is sort of a no win poem pretty one sided, but no real reason for it. I think if you gave me reasons why love did not exsist then this would be better but good try. |
love does exist |
OMG.. I love this poem... i can relate soo well with so much u said... ur a great writer dont let anyone tell u different... |
by CE
Like i hope you don't cut, but anyways this is another 5/5 you are good |