Amanda, Great job, touching poem. Sometimes we all have these down days. You'll be o.k. I hope you feel better soon. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

You must have written this after we finished talking?? I know what it's like to have one of these days and yesterday I had one too, so thank you for being there and for making me laugh....I really like this poem, you are a good writer and I love your poems, if I could I would give you more than 5....please talk to me when you feel low or at any time...

Love Sabrina

another well written poem of loneliness take care

This one is very good. Very sad and tragic!!

Good flow and nice rhyming scheme.

again i love it... hope you're feeling a little better... horrible moments like the ones you're describing come and go... hopefully they go and don't come back... wishing well

I thought your poem was amazing 5/5 well deserved keep writing

wondeful poem...emotions truly stud out in this one..really set the atmosphere...sad but glad ur ok now !

take care !

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

you seemed to have went thru a lot im glad you have a way to express it and you do that very well. great job