damn that makes me horny lol well lovly written and i like it.......holla back ~*shaneese*~

that was good keep doin wut ya do

I really liked how u wrote evrything out step by step and other stuff. but, good poem anyway Serenity

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Wow.. amazing everything was so detailed, and definalty worth reading... keep writting .. 5/5.. please read and comment on some of my poems, kirsty palmer xx

Wow.. amazing everything was so detailed, and definalty worth reading... keep writting .. 5/5.. please read and comment on some of my poems, kirsty palmer xx

I love it! Very nicely written, though was that really her dad?
*I'm quite confused
Nevertheless it was great. Still a 5/5!

Omg tihs is by far the best poem ive read on this site its so detailed and wow i love it so what if its long its AWESOME!!!!!! i wish i could write as good as you omg that would be a gift your so lucky!!!!!!!

Awesome poem good job

ashleigh

I love it.and keep it up.

5/5

Uhhh who's it for your husband or father but really great i was shocked though cause it was really really detailed it was like you were writing it during your (fun time) haha

Great Work