Aww.. so cute :) Good work hun
-xx-

Hey, this is great..keep on writing and take care...xoxo
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

U show a lot of feeling in ur work! Another good one! Keep posting! Take Care! Brooke

wow such a beutiful poem.....yes this feeling is really powerful and does alot to som1 who goes through it i can relate to this poem....u have expressed the effects of the feeling really well such a great read.

take care !