Dark wings

by redxiii   Mar 30, 2005


I have a feeling everyday it never really seems to go away at one time all i did was fight now i don't care for even that its crazy but so am i oh well one day i'll fly with dark wings free and i'll be to everything u can see ill watch over those i care for and destory those i do not one day maybe one day soon then when i have done what i need to i will fly in to the sun to be ash and nothing more that is really all i have to look forward for

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ren

    OMG! Red you are such an awesome poet!!! I LOVE ITTTT!!!!!!!!! so expressional! Great choice of wording. Well I love ya and want ya to keep it up! Bye! 5/5 all the way.

  • 19 years ago

    by Illusion

    Great poem...creative title
    I've put you on my favorites :-)
    Nice job

    Love Always
    DFK

  • 19 years ago

    by ReenIe

    ok now u are a big liar i hope you know that. YOUR POEMS DO NOT SUCK!!!!!!! GET THAT THRU YOUR LIL HEAD!!!! keep writing i mean if you were so bad then why do all your poems have high ratings..? lol !!!! bye!!!! ill be coming back to see if have written anything new soon si ill keep in touch bye!!!1

  • 19 years ago

    by Cloud

    excellent ^_^

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    hello. . . THANK YOU FOR FINALLY WRITING A POEM!!! hehe i get to be the FIRST person to comment your FIRST FU.CKING POEM! and you liar it doesn't suck! it's really great! and i do love it! it's sweet and morbid so it rocks! today sucked ass but i'm trying to be a lil happy. . . well keep writing poems PLEASE. . . or i'll CRY. . . hehe you know you can't refuse me now. . .

    Love, Taylor
    *blush* <idk i just felt like putting that there hehe. . .

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