hello. . . THANK YOU FOR FINALLY WRITING A POEM!!! hehe i get to be the FIRST person to comment your FIRST FU.CKING POEM! and you liar it doesn't suck! it's really great! and i do love it! it's sweet and morbid so it rocks! today sucked ass but i'm trying to be a lil happy. . . well keep writing poems PLEASE. . . or i'll CRY. . . hehe you know you can't refuse me now. . .

Love, Taylor
*blush* <idk i just felt like putting that there hehe. . .

excellent ^_^

ok now u are a big liar i hope you know that. YOUR POEMS DO NOT SUCK!!!!!!! GET THAT THRU YOUR LIL HEAD!!!! keep writing i mean if you were so bad then why do all your poems have high ratings..? lol !!!! bye!!!! ill be coming back to see if have written anything new soon si ill keep in touch bye!!!1

Great poem...creative title
I've put you on my favorites :-)
Nice job

Love Always
DFK

OMG! Red you are such an awesome poet!!! I LOVE ITTTT!!!!!!!!! so expressional! Great choice of wording. Well I love ya and want ya to keep it up! Bye! 5/5 all the way.