Hate

by Ashley Van Eperen   Mar 30, 2005


I hate how you're image,
you're face,
its always there.
I hate how i need you,
I hate how i care.
I hate how my feelings take over my life.
I hate how you pretend, every things alright.
I hate how you played me,
I just get so mad.
The anger is raging
I can't hold it back.
I hate how its boiling, bubbling inside
I hate how i love you, and how you wont cry.
I hate how happiness used to be mine.
I just wanna smile,
I wanna be OK.
I want all this pain to just go away.
That means you too!
Just leave me alone,
Don't worry about me, I'm already on my own.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ~DyingBlackRose~

    I know how this feels and it's not that great. Good Job. Keep it up!
    5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    thanks..! i'll try to see how i can fit that into my next peom!

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    Okay job, I thought the rhyme was good, but there wasn't really any imagery or anything that really made it stick out to me. The topic was also a bit cliche. I think that this poem shows that you have a lot of promise in poetry writing, just work on possibly using more imagery and metaphor in your writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    thanks for ur comments u guys! i'll get to urs as soon as i'm done checkin the rest of mine!
    xoxo
    ¤~§Gizmo§~¤

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    very good.. I like this one a lot =) I voted a 5! keep it up...!!! please check out some of my poems.. thanks a lot, hugs

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