Comments : Master of Illusion

  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    The title really lured me in and the poem was a great follow up, your wording is wonderful-5

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    The Heart That Touches Yours,
    Heather Michelle Craig
    <3--Shauns Forever--<3

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! i love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Unseen Exposure

    "Illusions of steely knives cutting out my soul,
    Whenever I breakout and become enslaved by-
    Sensuously chained by passion leading into love"
    I truly admired those lines, and I really liked the way you referred to love throughout this poem, as if it were almost evil. Perhaps I have interpreted it wrong, and if I have, I apologise. Excellent write.