Hey just wanted to let you know your poem is good, its well written, i don't believe in the contents of your poem, as I do believe in God, and in heaven, I think my faith in knowing there is a better place, and one day I will be there, is what makes this life easier to deal with, so I'd rather accept there is a God andI want to know him, and please him, and I hope you do to. there is never a better feeling than to feel the prescence of our Lord by asking him into your heart, and just sitting there and feeeling that. Anyway well written poem, and i hope you can take a minute to look at mine, and if you have any questions please feel free to contact me. Thanks Love ya, Becky