this is really really well written..although very sad..=(..well done, keep up the good work..take care
love tegan
xoxo

Such a sad poem, love the first stanza! keep strong sweetheart! 5

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The Heart That Touches Yours,
Heather Michelle Craig
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That's sad, I'm sorry to hear what you went through!! Hope that you are ok....I feel your pain, I really do!!! Great poem, I really like it...

hunnie, this was wonderful, it made me cry, i hope your okay. 5/5 it was great, very deep. i understand, its nearly the opposite for the perfect part, i'm friends with few but they dont know i cut.
Dayna-

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CHECK OUT SOME OF MINE SOMETIMES THIS IS REALLY SAD........ I LIKE IT LOL

hey the poem was awesome.. i'm sorry that you have to go through so much pain with cuttin and your "dad".. my dad isnt around much either so i dont know what its like.. but if there is ne thing that i can do just holla.. Also a cutter i understand that pain.. stay strong you dont have to depend on just your knife..
bye bye EJ

hello girly, No it doesn't sound conceited.. And you know how some poems that are longggg seem really long? lol Well yours just flowed so well and had soo much meaning behind it, I didn't think it was long enough!! lol I really think this is an amazing peice, and i give it a five.
As for the whole situation, and what is happening in real life, I want you to know though I am a stranger I feel for oyu. And I hope you make it through.. *hugs*
Liz

Wow...that was super sad... Im sorry about your dad... But you should be happy that hes even in your life...My real father doesn't know me and I don't know him... It will be 14 years without him in september... I don't even know where the hell he is... and its not just him... its that entire half of my family.... Again im so sorry that that happens... Go ahead and contact me sometime...
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wow... that's a really deep poem.. you've expressed your feelings so well... you've expressed how i feel too.. i SO know how this is.... life is hard, but keep your head up, and things will get better.. you just have to believe.... you're an awesome writer... and you help me to feel that i'm not alone in this world and i'm not the only one feeling this way.. i really hope that you don't feel like you're alone in the pain either, cuz you're not... believe me...... it hurts.. it's hard, but you just need to keep your head high.. things will get better!!
keep writing.. you've got awesome stuff!! keep up the good work... if u ever need to talk about anything, u can talk to me if u want to....
again, great job
~DeAnna~

great poem! :) im sorry ur in so much pain:( if u even need to talk u can e-mail me.
bethers_is_my_baby@rock.com

this poem is crazy. Its so sad. I'm so sorry. I fyou ever need to talk you can email me anytime! I hope everything works out

that was so sad and i still loved it..you are such a good writer and i really love reading your poems..