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by »«¤ß詤»«   Mar 30, 2005


Living in a moment, waves of memories
not knowing where my heart lies
give me a sign
please
please
please

complicated situations, different kinds of relations
life's harder then what it seems at first glance
make room for mistakes, we all deserve a second chance

what is left to achieve?
is their anything we can truly believe?
what is right between the heart and the head?
can i believe anythings thats said?

we all make mistakes
some we have to live with
we cannot take
if we're not prepared to give

who is this person
starring back at me?
is this really......
who I've grown to be?

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  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I can really relate to a lot of your poems. It's very real and the emotion comes through strong. This one is full of questioning...and life is always full of questions...ones that aren't answered....wonderful job.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by AJ

    really good. Lot of feeling in it. 5/5 ~keep it up~

    -no more

  • 19 years ago

    by stephyG

    oMG... Great work luved ya poem mwahZii keep it up XOXoxxx Stephy :)

  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    Very well written hun! Keep it up! ~5/5~
    Love alwayz....
    Haily

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    starring should be staring
    we cannot take
    if we're not prepared to give - this is my favorite part. 4/5, good job.

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